Writing buddies a.k.a. critique partners

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With my writing buddy Denise at the RNA Conference

I enjoyed a ‘writerly’ evening with another novel writer, Denise Barnes who is also preparing her first fiction work. She’s already published a non-fiction book which can be seen at her site.

We swap hints and tips, recommend and exchange books, encourage each other about courses and competitions. But the best thing is that we read each other’s work and critique it. Now you have to get on well to do this, so well that you can say things that may seem harsh. With both of us going through the same process, we can empathise as well as criticise.

Her novel is a dual time-line family story, mine an action thriller. While our imagined worlds are quite different, we get really involved in them. It’s spooky when she turns round to me and says things like,’You know that’s the sort of thing Karen (my heroine) would say.’

Trust is key: you are handing over your ‘baby’ for another to look at, assess and critique. But hopefully that person will stand as a godparent/patron/responsible adult and help the infant mature into a full-grown adult.

Update: Since I wrote this over three years ago, I’ve published three Roma Nova thrillers. Denise, my critique partner has written another non-fiction book, also on her site, and her novel has expanded into a cracking trilogy. Neither of us would have reached this point without the other.

If you write, find a critique partner/writing buddy – worth their weight in gold!

Alison Morton is the author of Roma Nova thrillers, INCEPTIO, and PERFIDITAS. Third in series, SUCCESSIO, is now out.

The importance of feedback

In January, I was accepted on the New Writers’ Scheme of the Romantic Novelists’ Association. I feel honoured to be in the company of proper published authors whose members have sold aeons of books. I’ve found it a friendly, inclusive group whose members do not differentiate between published and newbies. On the contrary, they are very encouraging!

I polished up my grand’oeuvre and sent it off for reading by an experienced, published author. Imagine the state my nerves were in when I opened the envelope containing my returned typescript and THE REPORT.

I received 6 pages of encouraging, helpful constructive and practical guidance. I was called ‘a talented author’, my style was ‘wonderful – it has real fluency, humour, warmth and zest’, I would be ‘getting published in the future’.  There’s more: ‘this book is so inventive’ and ‘Congrats to the author for creating such an appealing hero’ and ‘The author is brilliant at plot’.

Wow!

But it wasn’t ready for publication and needed  work. She was 100% right. Each point she made was practical, unfailingly helpful as well as being kindly delivered. It spurred me on to re-examining and reworking a load of other areas.

This wasn’t just feedback from my friend, my mum or Auntie Flo. This was professional and worth its weight in gold.

What a day to start – it’s World Book Day!

Here starteth my blog…

I’m a newbie novel writer. I’ve been a translator for many years and have had articles on translation, business and French property published plus I’ve written an academic thesis for which they gave me a distinction 🙂

I currently write a French property blog at http://ltps-fr.blogspot.com/ which seems to please a few people.

I hope to record observations and experience, but hopefully not trials & tribulations (fairly boring), of my writing life.

I will get my books published…